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    In Between

    I dreamt of you, in-between
    Where cliché scrapes of paper
    Started to seep into our palms,
    While we quietly listened to metal—
    Sipping cups of coffee,
    Watching the sun rise
    In dark purples and greens.

    In my dream my skin was covered
    In ink, the kind that fills my room
    With poetry wallpaper.
    It was the first time I let you really
    See my dust filled heart.

    You listened to every single beat,
    As the sun held us together with
    Chain smoke and pretty colors.

    I did not want to awake—
    Will you hold my painted hand
    When the grey realities steal me
    Once again from my dreams.

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    Nice!
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    That's a really good poem, I quite like it.

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    Nice work



    "Echoes from howling winds stretch far beyond the sea,
    whilst voices murmuring in the waves, set the
    spirit of the night sea free."



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    Quote Originally Posted by Boomerang View Post
    Nice!
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    Thank you, glad you like.

    Quote Originally Posted by angra View Post
    That's a really good poem, I quite like it.
    Well thank you very much, I quite like that you quite like it. <3

    Quote Originally Posted by Missyy View Post
    Nice work


    Thanks Dear.

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    iirc THIS reminded me of sips of street lights

    couldn't tell you why
    from my canvas
    a hand-script.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Eng View Post
    iirc THIS reminded me of sips of street lights

    couldn't tell you why
    I tend to repeat certain words, often (something I'm working on). That's probably the case.


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    Poppy Seeds

    We eat poppy seeds
    through straws,
    yearning for flesh
    pressed against flesh.
    Love is more than
    broken teeth,
    shattered dreams
    of you and me.
    If my palms had claws
    would you still kiss
    in-between my gums,
    and my two front teeth?

    I have melodies that want to breathe-
    I ache for what you see,
    and what you believe.
    Flowers drown if you plan to leave me.


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    Another wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by angra View Post
    Another wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it.
    Grand, thank you. I think I'll start posting in this one since it's already created with a prior poem.


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