The Rocky Road

[reeree]

hello! well ok its time to let u know what this is about. well my name is reeree n i am 13 n i want to be a cartoonist when i am older. this is my 1st final of my cartoon script im gonna make called the rocky road. i made the 1st tag about chat avenue forums. sorry if its not funny or good its my 1st try. pls tell me if it sux??

[Whoa! Shut It Down]

Lawl its cute, but it wasnt funny
Keep tryin on the punchlines

[reeree]

yeah i know im notta comedian

[Whoa! Shut It Down]

But comics ish spossed tuh be funny

[reeree]

i knowwwwww! its my 1st try n i didnt think of a good un. i promise d next will be funee

[Lioness]

i like the "oh lawd" expression in the last frame.

it's pretty simplistic, but for your first try (and your age), it's cute.
just keep going at it. :D

[32mTexas]

pretty good I guess . Better than I would do if I tried. I can draw pretty well but I'm not much of a writer and I'm only funny spontaneously. I'm not funny at all if I try to be . Good job though.

[Jay!]

Meh. Guess its ok for a first.

[AnnabelleBlond]

I like it ~ in a weird way.

[TheMan77]

Nice Job dude, keep practicing! I used to draw a lot until i discovered: Video games