I like

[Steph]

this poem i below im still working on it...cuz i dont like the last verse...so im gonna work with it..but i want to see wat u guys think..its alright if u dont like it..cuz its not that good...lol

I go past your work
to see if you're there
if i see your car
then i know where you are

i like how you say hey
when i'm not even
looking your way

i like how you just look at me
and i smile
when im around you, i feel free

What im trying to say is
i like you
i wish to be with you
but the question is
what about you?

heres a short poem thats not that great...u might think part of it sounds familar cuz i used some of the verses in the poem above..but here it goes..

I like the way you do
your hair
I like how you can always
say something to make me laugh
i like the way you look at me
i like the way you say hey
when im not even paying attention
i like talking to you
i like being around you
question is
do you like me too?

[Fearless™]

the second one is definitely better than the first...<<< but I didn't really like any of them. sorry.

[Steph]

thx fearless...and its no problem that u didnt really like them...but i was surprised that you thought the second one was better...lol..cuz i wrote that in like 10 minutes or so...lol