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Old 06-11-2006, 02:24 AM   #1
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I thought i knew who you were,
but i guess i was wrong

Instead of me, it was my best friend you preferred
Now i have to get over you, and yes thats gonna take long

To think of you all the time is a sin to me
So I try to stop and occupy my time

Now you want to come back, and be everything you want me to be
But i no longer call you mine

So it was a long time, but i moved on now
I can't be with you

I looked for someone else, and guess what i found
I found someone who really cares, and he lets me be me and thats cool

You can't come back i'm apologize
Thats just not how its meant to be

And as you grow up, i hope you realize
You can't come back into my life expecting to be all thats in me.
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Old 06-11-2006, 10:30 AM   #2
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I thought it was quite clumsy...it didn't flow that well...and it's also a bit informal.
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Old 06-11-2006, 05:39 PM   #3
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yea like fearless said..it didnt flow too well...maybe if it did..it would of been better....sorry
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