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Old 06-11-2006, 11:07 PM   #1
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You became my very best friend..my heart, my love, my soul
The one on whom I could depend to get me on a roll
You've always been here to guide me when I don't know which path to take
You show the way so lovingly so I didnt make a mistake
I know I've not been there for you like a good lover should
And I know the things I put you throught haven't been very good
I just want to say I'm sorry, and at times that's not enough
And at time we both worry, when things get very rough
I know that I get jealous even though I know I shouldn't
I know it makes things worse for us..to feel this way, I wish I couldn't
But all the things I think and feel don't make me love you any less
My love for you is true and real, this I will confess
I'll love you until the day I die, even when you may not think so
You are the one that I'll stand by and watch as our love grows
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Old 06-13-2006, 12:34 PM   #2
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That was an awesome poem.
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Old 06-13-2006, 07:21 PM   #3
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that was very good ...
i liked the flow of the poem ...
well done ...
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Old 06-13-2006, 10:02 PM   #4
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Old 01-17-2009, 03:14 PM   #6
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You became my very best friend..my heart, my love, my soul
The one on whom I could depend to get me on a roll
You've always been here to guide me when I don't know which path to take
You show the way so lovingly so I didnt make a mistake
I know I've not been there for you like a good lover should
And I know the things I put you throught haven't been very good
I just want to say I'm sorry, and at times that's not enough
And at time we both worry, when things get very rough
I know that I get jealous even though I know I shouldn't
I know it makes things worse for us..to feel this way, I wish I couldn't
But all the things I think and feel don't make me love you any less
My love for you is true and real, this I will confess
I'll love you until the day I die, even when you may not think so
You are the one that I'll stand by and watch as our love grows
Eh, not a true fan of this one.
For me the flow was off.
I like bits and pieces of it though.
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I'll sing it one last time for you
Then we really have to go
You've been the only thing that's right
In all I've done

And I can barely look at you
But every single time I do
I know we'll make it anywhere
Away from here.
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