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06-12-2006, 07:39 PM
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Just another poem..
Only You
I've felt the hell
Please help me, hold me
This life I'll never tell
Sometime soon my wish will come true
because the end is near
but you see my eyes through the tears
One fake face after another
Love the haters
I don't wanna be like that
where no one's real
I hate how that would feel
Frustrated, Irritated
Disconnected from it all
I'm asking, I'm pleading
for one thing that's real
To you I'm giving in
Come take me, Come save me
I want to start again
I'll open my broken heart
Because I've reached the end
And you are the way to begin
I've seen a million empty smiles
Living in denial
I don't wanna live like that
where nothing's real
I hate how it is to feel
Frustrated, Irritated
Disconnected from it all
The weight of the world
Has pushed me to the wall
I'm breaking, I'm aching
for something beautiful
All the riches in this world
Couldn't fill this great big hole
It takes something so much more
Only you can take me
You can make me whole
Hope you guys liked it.
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06-12-2006, 08:47 PM
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nice on Kiari, reps 
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06-13-2006, 01:38 AM
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Fanks 
Amy, could you understand this one? 
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06-14-2006, 04:18 PM
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OMG!! That was AWSOME!!! And were you talking to me or the_girl? But I did understand it this time. 
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Thankies Razyni
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06-14-2006, 07:25 PM
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that was really good kiari ...
i really like reading your poems ...
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Thanks Gordon
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06-14-2006, 10:50 PM
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You, Amy aka Fearless xDD you said you couldn't understand my other two.
Thanks Mystic, that means a lot to me.
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06-15-2006, 07:52 PM
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I talk too much!
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.x.
Ish awesome Kia ! *&&* I love your avatar *&&* Siggy too ^.^
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06-15-2006, 08:15 PM
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Great poem hun!
I loved it!
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06-16-2006, 04:58 PM
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Originally Posted by Kiari
You, Amy aka Fearless xDD you said you couldn't understand my other two.
Thanks Mystic, that means a lot to me.
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LOL... Don't worry...I understand this one perfectly. 
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Thankies Razyni
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