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The first page of a screenplay I'm writing
Old 06-13-2006, 12:09 AM   #1
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Default The first page of a screenplay I'm writing

This is page one of a screenplay I am currently riding. I'll be sure to post more later if response is good. It is entitled "Lycanthrope".


LYCANTHROPE



Written by: JOSHUA GREEN
Genre: TRAGIC DRAMA
SETTING: ca. late-1800s

FADE IN –

A young boy by the name of Christoph was walking down a wet sidewalk in London, England, when a constable noticed him and rushed over.


CONSTABLE

Hullo, there. Why are you out here all alone?






The boy looked up into the constables eyes with a look of sadness in his face. After a moment of hesitation, the boy finally spoke.


CHRISTOPH

I’m homeless, sir.


CONSTABLE
Why haven’t you got a home, young man? Surely you have parents?






The boy shook his head subtly. The constable looked down at the boy’s bare feet, and a look of sadness came across his face. He began to speak until the constable noticed a dark figure lurking nearby. The constable began to grab his baton until the young boy picked up a sharp object from the ground and stabbed the constable in the knee. The constable shrieked in pain, and thus the dark figure leapt. After the figure mauled the constable to his death, it looked at Christoph for a moment. Christoph began panting violently.

CHRISTOPH’S POV –

The creature’s eyes were of a yellowish color. The moonlight hit its eyes at such an angle, that it looked as though it weren’t exactly a beast, but part-man and part-beast.

CREATURES POV –

The young boy is still panting violently. His mouth is obviously dry. Christoph’s eyes were red. The creature pounces.

FADE OUT –

I know it's not much, but it'll get much better as time goes by. Please review on a scale of 1 - 10.
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