Another rushed poem.

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As I said last time I hate spending ages on poems, the 4th line is a filler because I just couldn't think of a better line, I may change it once my brain decides to finish it's holiday.

Anytime I close my eyes,
Images of you flood into my mind,
Having you near me would be the ultimate prize,
Remembering how long I've known you I know I was blind,
All I want is to be with you,
In your arms I'd love to stay,
Hearing your voice at night when it's just us two,
Really I just want to be with you everyday.

[Fearless™]

umm...maybe you should try and spend just a little more time on your poems.

[Gabriel]

Originally Posted by Fearless_Virgin

umm...maybe you should try and spend just a little more time on your poems.

Maybe you should spend a little more time studying logic/reason/philosophy/theology and come back to the debate forum.

Anyway. MIKE MY BOY. You are one sexually depraved little man. Or big man. Both I suppose.

[Mystic]

not bad for a "rushed" poem scouse ... ...

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Didn't like it much.
Could have been so much better if there was a little more time put into it.