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Old 06-15-2006, 03:59 AM   #1
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I love you.
I love the way you look at me.
I love the way your hair shines in the sun.
I love how you make me feel.
But, I hate...

I love you.
I love the way you look in the morning; when you've just woken up.
I love the way your hair feeings as I run my fingers through it.
I love how you smiles at me.
But, I hate...

I love you.
I love the way you glide into bed.
I love the way your skin feels against mine.
I love how you drive me crazy.
But, I hate...

I hate...
I hate the way you look at me; with sad eyes everynight we say bye.
I hate the way your tears flow when I'm not near.
I hate how we've never met </3
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Old 06-15-2006, 09:58 PM   #2
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i really liked this poem....great job!
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Old 06-16-2006, 12:14 AM   #3
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i really liked this poem....great job!
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Old 06-16-2006, 01:06 AM   #4
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~Snaps fingers 3 times~ Awsume poem...
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Old 06-16-2006, 04:51 AM   #5
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Lol.
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Old 06-16-2006, 05:06 AM   #6
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Wow hun that was awesome
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Old 06-16-2006, 05:13 AM   #7
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Old 06-17-2006, 05:16 AM   #8
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that was a really good poem!
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Old 06-17-2006, 07:39 AM   #9
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Old 06-17-2006, 08:32 AM   #10
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Woooow.

That was really well written!!

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-Good Repped If She Can.-

Well done. <3
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