An untitled poem by Underscore419

This is an original poem that I wrote. I hope you enjoy it.

I miss my girl oh, so much
She left at the hour of lunch
Before she went, she gave me a kiss
For this was a girl that I would surely miss

As days went by, I cried and cried
It felt as though my heart had died
I prayed and prayed to the Heavens above
For this was a girl that I surely loved

Then after a while, she finally came back
In hugs and kisses, I would not lack
Days went by, and we were together
This is the way we'll be forever

I rushed the poem a little bit, for the idea had come to me only ten minutes ago and I wanted to write it down before I forgot it. (Note: a possible title for this poem is For this was a Girl..., but I am still open for suggestions.)

[Steph]

i thought it was a pretty good poem...and thats a good title for it...good work..

[Fearless™]

wow...that is an awsome poem!

[Abriel]

Originally Posted by underscore419

This is an original poem that I wrote. I hope you enjoy it.

I miss my girl oh, so much
She left at the hour of lunch
Before she went, she gave me a kiss
For this was a girl that I would surely miss

As days went by, I cried and cried
It felt as though my heart had died
I prayed and prayed to the Heavens above
For this was a girl that I surely loved

Then after a while, she finally came back
In hugs and kisses, I would not lack
Days went by, and we were together
This is the way we'll be forever

I rushed the poem a little bit, for the idea had come to me only ten minutes ago and I wanted to write it down before I forgot it. (Note: a possible title for this poem is For this was a Girl..., but I am still open for suggestions.)

Meh it was mediocre at best.

[kai2]

It was like reading the lyrics of a really bad song by an even worse bad.

[Timmehh]

very good job