Honest opinions i'm trying to get good at this.

[Keikoa]

I told myself I wasn't going to fall;
This time I was going to stand tall,
When you came back I wasn't going to get weak in the knees;
I was going to learn that having you around wasn't what i really need,
But here you are agian being that sweet and gentle person you used to be;
Now i forgotten the days you hit me,
I let you back in and you did it again;
But the last time you promised me that it was the end,
I'm not here anymore for you to hit me;
I should have wlaked away instead of coming back on my knees.

[Fearless™]

I loved the last line <<<
and it was OK...
Some parts were a bit awkward for me because they were so long...
perhaps you were trying too hard with the rhyming...

[Abriel]

Originally Posted by Keikoa

I told myself I wasn't going to fall;
This time I was going to stand tall,
When you came back I wasn't going to get weak in the knees;
I was going to learn that having you around wasn't what i really need,
But here you are agian being that sweet and gentle person you used to be;
Now i forgotten the days you hit me,
I let you back in and you did it again;
But the last time you promised me that it was the end,
I'm not here anymore for you to hit me;
I should have wlaked away instead of coming back on my knees.

I don't know what to make of this one.
It's alright, it could have been better.