Time keeps breaking...

[Zigman]

it feels like that to me...every chance we have to smile...gets stolen by the eyes of prophecy...and the furies rage ..out of control..but I keep them locked away ..within deep oceans that reside inside my soul. Cracked the world in two ..reaching out for you..but the other half of love ..is half a world away. Time keeps breaking ..every chance it gets..the laughter of the fates..resound our regrets. But my desires ..fuel my fires.. of destinies that I believe are ours to claim. No matter what wars or battles may come...nothing can take the love we share...time and distance may try..but all their attempts are done in vain.

[Zero Xaerus]

Bravo . . It's Touching

[Abriel]

Originally Posted by Zigman

it feels like that to me...every chance we have to smile...gets stolen by the eyes of prophecy...and the furies rage ..out of control..but I keep them locked away ..within deep oceans that reside inside my soul. Cracked the world in two ..reaching out for you..but the other half of love ..is half a world away. Time keeps breaking ..every chance it gets..the laughter of the fates..resound our regrets. But my desires ..fuel my fires.. of destinies that I believe are ours to claim. No matter what wars or battles may come...nothing can take the love we share...time and distance may try..but all their attempts are done in vain.

I like this but your style of writing is sloppy.