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06-19-2006, 10:17 PM
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One Of My Poems...
Okay, before I type the poem,
Y'all gotta know some things first.
My poems are things that happen to me..that I do.
Second, the guy who I wrote this for meant a lot to me..still does.
Our song was I'm Lost Without You by Blink-182.
It'll make sense when you read it.
So..yeah..
Here it is:
"In My Room"
In my room,
All alone, music blasting
The sound off the walls.
Oh how I love my room,
So blue, so neat.
But whenever I'm in my room,
It takes over my mind,
& there you are, standing on my feet.
In my room,
Deep in my thoughts,
About you, frequent plots.
I look about for a razor so sharp,
So the pain, will melt right off.
In my room,
When it goes black,
I feel dizzy, as if there is no turning back.
In my room,
I try to see,
That you aren't lost without me...
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I know it's not good,
but I just like to write how I feel..
So..yeah.
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06-19-2006, 10:24 PM
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nice poem faye i liked it 
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06-19-2006, 11:10 PM
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Originally Posted by ♥Sugar were going down♥
Okay, before I type the poem,
Y'all gotta know some things first.
My poems are things that happen to me..that I do.
Second, the guy who I wrote this for meant a lot to me..still does.
Our song was I'm Lost Without You by Blink-182.
It'll make sense when you read it.
So..yeah..
Here it is:
"In My Room"
In my room,
All alone, music blasting
The sound off the walls.
Oh how I love my room,
So blue, so neat.
But whenever I'm in my room,
It takes over my mind,
& there you are, standing on my feet.
In my room,
Deep in my thoughts,
About you, frequent plots.
I look about for a razor so sharp,
So the pain, will melt right off.
In my room,
When it goes black,
I feel dizzy, as if there is no turning back.
In my room,
I try to see,
That you aren't lost without me...
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I know it's not good,
but I just like to write how I feel..
So..yeah. |
not bad...........
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My heart can't possibly break when it wasn't even whole to start with.
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06-19-2006, 11:36 PM
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good poem..i also write poems only if ive been thru the situation before..it seems to be a lot easier...lol
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06-20-2006, 01:14 AM
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good poem
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06-20-2006, 06:13 AM
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Good poem, Faye. ^__^;
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06-20-2006, 06:31 AM
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good poem.........
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06-20-2006, 04:42 PM
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I didn't really like it...but it's good that you're writing what you feel...
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06-20-2006, 10:38 PM
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<3
Well thanks to all who liked it..
& whoever didn't like...
Well... I don't really care 'caz I don't think it's good either.
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06-20-2006, 11:32 PM
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That was good, I liked it.
^_^;
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