a poem

[the ghost]

my heart my soul burns but that one love i alwways urn 4 will never return
i live i die i wish i felt alive i see i bleed only that willl never be
wen i lay at night i scream i can see that will never be i love i h8 i morn and nuthing will
ever be the same i leave my dreams and never could see the beast is near in my dreams so i weep
all my love all my pain all my hurt my soul late at night always burns i want to love but i better run
my love my heart my dreams will never be only wat i cant see i die i fight i cry and ill never say good bye
as my life turn my heart burns in my dreams i could never really see that will never be i know i must leave i will not be defeated i only dream of the pain wat i can never see as a leafe falling from a tree
time stops my mind drops and the life of wat i see can no longer be i just dream
ii live i die i cry i fight just once i wish my life would be alright


OK!!!!!!!! IF U DUNN LIKE MY GRAMER KEEP UR FILTHY MOUTH SHUT I DUNN GIVE A **** IF U DUNN HAVE SOMTHING NICE TO SAY DUNN SAY IT AT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Melannie]

Rofl.

Just...Grow up Chris.

>_>

[the ghost]

Bye The Way Wat Happend To The Other Guy Who Insulted Me Where He Go Lmfaoooo

[Melannie]

Originally Posted by the ghost

Bye The Way Wat Happend To The Other Guy Who Insulted Me Where He Go Lmfaoooo

Har har.

[Fearless™]

OMG!
I love the 2nd line

i live i die i wish i felt alive i see i bleed only that willl never be

Originally Posted by the ghost

my heart my soul burns but that one love i alwways urn 4 will never return
i live i die i wish i felt alive i see i bleed only that willl never be
wen i lay at night i scream i can see that will never be i love i h8 i morn and nuthing will
ever be the same i leave my dreams and never could see the beast is near in my dreams so i weep
all my love all my pain all my hurt my soul late at night always burns i want to love but i better run
my love my heart my dreams will never be only wat i cant see i die i fight i cry and ill never say good bye
as my life turn my heart burns in my dreams i could never really see that will never be i know i must leave i will not be defeated i only dream of the pain wat i can never see as a leafe falling from a tree
time stops my mind drops and the life of wat i see can no longer be i just dream
ii live i die i cry i fight just once i wish my life would be alright


OK!!!!!!!! IF U DUNN LIKE MY GRAMER KEEP UR FILTHY MOUTH SHUT I DUNN GIVE A **** IF U DUNN HAVE SOMTHING NICE TO SAY DUNN SAY IT AT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rofl.

I thought it was terrible. I'm sorry.

[the ghost]

my ass it was terrible let c if u could do better huh and wats with all the insulting u only wish u could do as half as good do i have to remind u that the first guy who insulted me isnt there so i think u should keep ur mouth shut have a nice day

It was great.
I loved it.
Can I have it?
I want to give it to this girl, I'm inlove with.

[Melannie]

Originally Posted by the ghost

my ass it was terrible let c if u could do better huh and wats with all the insulting u only wish u could do as half as good do i have to remind u that the first guy who insulted me isnt there so i think u should keep ur mouth shut have a nice day

Try again.

Originally Posted by the ghost

my ass it was terrible let c if u could do better huh and wats with all the insulting u only wish u could do as half as good do i have to remind u that the first guy who insulted me isnt there so i think u should keep ur mouth shut have a nice day

By posting a poem, you seem to only expect good comments rather than what people really think of the poem. I honestly thought that it was quite terrible, being my opinion. Excuse the fuck out of me for not lying to your stupid ass and saying that I liked it when I truly thought it was horrid. And, yes. I could do better, compared to you, so don't even go there, hun. You have a nice day as well.