September 11th

[Caitlyn20]

It's been years that you've been gone
I never knew I would be alone
Your clothes still hang in the closet next to mine
I can still taste your favorite wine

On September 11th I got a call
All that smoke had you up against a wall
You said everything will be alright
That you weren't giving up with out a fight

I watched the news all afternoon
Praying to see you-- not a moment to soon
Smoke and firemen was all you would see
People screaming to be free

The buildings was burning
And my eyes were to from crying
Deep inside my heart was dying
Never knowing if I would see you again; my husband, my best friend

When the people got free I cried
Praying to see you standing in the crowd
I never saw you standing out there
Emotions raw, staying home I couldn't bear

I went to the scene and a policeman stopped me
I cried my husbands up there somebody please help me
He said they were doing all they could do
I'll never forget the men all in blue

It's been five years that he's been gone
My love for him is still very strong
Everyone were heros on that fateful day
I'll never forget him as I continue to pray.

[Fearless™]

aww...that was quite sad <<

[roomie]

OMG that was beautiful and made me cry.Where is it from Caitlyn? Not seeing the towers it just doesn't seem like NYC anymore.

[landdownunder]

Thats so sad

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Very sad, and a great poem.

[Caitlyn20]

Originally Posted by roomie

OMG that was beautiful and made me cry.Where is it from Caitlyn? Not seeing the towers it just doesn't seem like NYC anymore.

The poem was wrote by me. I was watching a clip on the trade centers one day in class & the thoughts came. And thanx you guys.

[roomie]

OMG that makes the poem even better. GREAT JOB. I repped you.I'm from NY so it hits me hard.

[Dame_Mystic_Rayne]

My father was sent of to war after that, and now I hardly see him anymore, it is not because of his new wife, it is because of the war why we aren't like we used to be...... Great Poem...made me cry.

Originally Posted by Caitlyn20

It's been years that you've been gone
I never knew I would be alone
Your clothes still hang in the closet next to mine
I can still taste your favorite wine

On September 11th I got a call
All that smoke had you up against a wall
You said everything will be alright
That you weren't giving up with out a fight

I watched the news all afternoon
Praying to see you-- not a moment to soon
Smoke and firemen was all you would see
People screaming to be free

The buildings was burning
And my eyes were to from crying
Deep inside my heart was dying
Never knowing if I would see you again; my husband, my best friend

When the people got free I cried
Praying to see you standing in the crowd
I never saw you standing out there
Emotions raw, staying home I couldn't bear

I went to the scene and a policeman stopped me
I cried my husbands up there somebody please help me
He said they were doing all they could do
I'll never forget the men all in blue

It's been five years that he's been gone
My love for him is still very strong
Everyone were heros on that fateful day
I'll never forget him as I continue to pray.

-coughs, blinks- Next! That is one of the worst poems I've ever read in my life. Some morons think that, because it's about September 11th, I should give you praise for writing such a great poem. I'm going to prove them wrong by giving this a 0/5.

[roomie]

Originally Posted by michael_4071

-coughs, blinks- Next! That is one of the worst poems I've ever read in my life. Some morons think that, because it's about September 11th, I should give you praise for writing such a great poem. I'm going to prove them wrong by giving this a 0/5.

Then you don't know a good poem.It is a great job and very meaningful.