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Old 07-08-2006, 11:09 PM   #1
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Old 07-08-2006, 11:10 PM   #2
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It was nice. o_o' :]]
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That was really good
i liked it.
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Old 07-08-2006, 11:12 PM   #4
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It's crappy.

I get bored.



Thanx though.

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Old 07-08-2006, 11:24 PM   #5
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Old 07-08-2006, 11:26 PM   #6
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lol thats what i would call a random poem ...
i liked it tho melannie keep up the good work ... ...
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Old 07-09-2006, 12:42 AM   #8
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It was OK. A bit random. Can't really see a distinct connection from one line to the next. The idea doesn't really flow all that well. The only poetic quality there would be the layout and the tempo I suppose.

Simply put, It Suuuuuuuucked,
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