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07-21-2006, 12:28 AM
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Love and Heartbreak
this is a poem or watever u wanna call it...not sure if its really a poem...mainly juss my feelings....but i wrote it couple nights ago...and i dunno if its any good or not...kinda bad..i dunno lol...there were a couple lines i took from sayings...but here it goes...
Love is when you hold his hand and dont want to let go Love is when he likes you for you he doesnt want you to change Love is when you always want to be with that him love is when your happy Love is when you care so much Now you know what love is but my question is do you know what heartbreak is? its when you hurt so much that you want him back it when you cry every night before you go to sleep its when you wake up and wish you were still together Its when you think, "well maybe if i did this or said that" I wouldn't be hurting so bad It when you miss him so much so, take your choice love or heartbreak love sounds better but doesnt heartbreak come after love i wasnt sure of that ending or this ending love or heartbreak love sounds better but prepare for your heart to break it always does someway or another thanks for reading this!
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07-21-2006, 12:31 AM
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I read it and it was going in loops I guess but It's great non the less.
May I add a Comment? Love is about Compramises . x_x The Poem lacked his side. Blah, I'm so mean . . But I liked it though. |
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07-21-2006, 12:59 AM
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thx for commenting...i understand wat you mean....im probably gonna work on it some more...
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07-21-2006, 01:02 AM
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07-21-2006, 01:05 AM
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I talk too much!
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thx...lol...im not the type who gets mad if someone says something bad or something like that....becuz its their opinion...so why get mad? i dunno y people do...i dont...its hard for me to get mad lol...i duno if thats wat u were talking bout or not...lol
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07-21-2006, 03:10 PM
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Great Steph.. I really liked it.
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07-21-2006, 04:50 PM
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thanks nicole...and thanks fearless...glad u liked it!
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