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Old 07-26-2006, 01:19 AM   #1
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Angry Do You Wanna Really Try

I often sit and wonder
if those lips of yours would be softer
once you get that chip off your shoulder

You know what I am saying
also how I am wishing and praying
that your heart would stop me from paying

The price of love and friendship
but instead you make me out to be a dip
shit
among my friends and family, makin me a misfit

If only you could see
what the hell your doin to me
I no longer want to
fucking plee
for love that is supposed to be free!!!

I do not know why I stick around
I have no reason to die
but I feel like I wanna be underground
thought I was finally found
but now I just listen to your lies!!!

I no longer want to
fucking cry
listen up girl cus this is the last time
and all this
shit is on the line...

Do you wanna really try?!
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Old 07-26-2006, 11:22 AM   #2
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i like it...good poem!
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Old 07-26-2006, 02:47 PM   #3
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somehow, I don't believe you wrote that yourself.
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Old 07-26-2006, 03:42 PM   #4
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I wrote that poem earlier this year, and posted it in this very same forum...iono if u could check or not, since CM changed the forum n all, but I did post this poem (and yes it is my poem) before, and since I haven't been writing as of late, I looked through all my old stuff and posted it up in ere.
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Old 07-26-2006, 10:05 PM   #5
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Nice... maybe a lil less swearing would b nicer but i still like it lol
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