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Old 07-27-2006, 10:06 PM   #1
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Default Tony, I can see why

this is a poem i kinda juss finished....and tony if u read this, thats alright with me...it doesnt matter....its juss how i feel....and this is one way to get it out...

We've been friends
for a long time
but i went and screwed that up
I lied to you a lot

Now, I can see why you hate me

I pretended to be different people
Making fake accounts
And talking to you

Now I can see why you hate me

Anything I say or do
You wont believe
But i can understand that

Cuz, now i can see why you hate me

i wish you didnt hate me
but thats okay
because of all
the **** ive done to you

Now, I can see why you hate me

I wish that I didnt lie
I wish I would of been a better friend
I wish you knew that I cared

I'm sorry it took me
so long
To figure out
why you hate me

(by the way tony...its juss a poem...i know it wont make u feel sorry or whatever..i understand)
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i liked it
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Old 07-27-2006, 10:16 PM   #3
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thanks.........
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Old 07-27-2006, 11:39 PM   #4
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Silly girl.
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Goodness. It made me laugh.
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Old 07-28-2006, 01:03 PM   #6
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I giggled.

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-blinks- you people are the most tactless ppl I've met
Ok. Steph, here's the thing. It might not be a great poem, but I think that you just want to use this as a mean of telling Tony how you feel. So, I'm not going to comment on the poem itself and bore you with all the technical details...but I do think that whoever this person is...he should really reconsider. You're a nice person, and I doubt you did any of those things deliberately to hurt him. The fact that you actually wrote a poem, proved that you were really sorry and I think he (Tony) should give you another chance.
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Old 07-29-2006, 12:35 PM   #9
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thx fearless...i didnt think it was a great poem either...but the odds of tony giving me another chance is slim to none...cuz he already told me hes not going to...so i dunno...but thx for ur comment!
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np I hope everything works out.
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