-blinks- you people are the most tactless ppl I've met
Ok. Steph, here's the thing. It might not be a great poem, but I think that you just want to use this as a mean of telling Tony how you feel. So, I'm not going to comment on the poem itself and bore you with all the technical details...but I do think that whoever this person is...he should really reconsider. You're a nice person, and I doubt you did any of those things deliberately to hurt him. The fact that you actually wrote a poem, proved that you were really sorry and I think he (Tony) should give you another chance.