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Old 08-01-2006, 02:36 AM   #1
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You made my day
Telling you things
I don't normally say
And still you seem
To ignore the fact
That I absolutly
Hate you.
And You Lie
And You Plot
You Run around
I loved every word
That slipped out of your mouth
And Now they haunt me
Strangle me at night
When I think of that day
and those stupid harsh fights
So they said, 'Shut the Fuck up.'
And 'Leave Her Alone.'
I faced my own fears
And I fought my own fights
I'll take those lovely words
and wring them around your neck
So hopefully you choke and die
You pryed open my heart
Just to see what's inside
So Nothing makes sence in this
Odd-Ball of a poem
And This Creator
Has nothing to make sence of
in her Odd-Ball Head
So Do as you want and
Say what you please
And you know who you are
Not that I hate you as much
I just wish oh how I wish
You couldn't have put me through
As much as you did.
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Old 08-01-2006, 02:38 AM   #2
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Ohh myy.. o_o
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Old 08-01-2006, 03:53 AM   #3
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Lmfao @ Aaron.
I liked it, Sarah. =]
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Old 08-01-2006, 04:05 AM   #4
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o_o It smelled.
Lying is a sin please.
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Old 08-01-2006, 12:30 PM   #5
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i thought it was a pretty good poem! good work
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Old 08-01-2006, 12:54 PM   #6
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Rofl. I liked it, but I liked the title more.
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Old 08-01-2006, 02:57 PM   #7
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Really good Sarah

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