I've Been Down

[Mezmerized]

I've been down ,I've been low
Hangin out nowhere to go
Cold at night on the street
Clothes on my back, nothin on my feet
I got no money to my name
Guess there's only me to blame
Day after day time goes so slow
No pot of gold on the end of my rainbow
People always stoppin to stare and be quick to say "Hey You There"
This aint no place for you to stay
So get up and get on your way
Yes, I am down I am low
But for now this is the only life i know..

[Mystic]

Originally Posted by Mezmerized

I've been down ,I've been low
Hangin out nowhere to go
Cold at night on the street
Clothes on my back, nothin on my feet
I got no money to my name
Guess there's only me to blame
Day after day time goes so slow
No pot of gold on the end of my rainbow
People always stoppin to stare and be quick to say "Hey You There"
This aint no place for you to stay
So get up and get on your way
Yes, I am down I am low
But for now this is the only life i know..

that was really good ... i enjoyed that ...
well done ...

[Chicksta]

Good poem, Mez. I really liked it.

[the girl]

good poem.......

[Fearless™]

that was pretty good...especially the first couple of lines